CROM Update 051 with Jake Jacobs editing a Viking-themed FREE COMIC BOOK SCRIPT

Jan 16

In the 51st episode of the CROM Updates Podcast, Kurt Brugel and guest editor Jake Jacobs discuss Kurt's free comic book script titled The Devil from the Fjord. This eight-page Viking and Norse mythology-inspired story explores themes of tension, morality, and the supernatural. Jake provides in-depth, Denny O’Neil-style feedback, focusing on sharpening the narrative flow, enriching the dialogue's period authenticity, and clarifying scene descriptions for artists. For instance, he recommends using poetic language in narration and dialogue to evoke an ancient tone, ensuring character actions align with their archetypes and cultural context.

The discussion highlights the visual challenges of scripting for comics. Jake emphasizes the importance of clear descriptions for panel composition, including spatial elements like the rocky ledge near the hot spring and the placement of characters in the foreground or background. He critiques how the script handles tension-building, advising Kurt to layer character interactions and symbolism, such as the looming threat of Eydis, the mermaid-like antagonist, whose regal yet monstrous aura symbolizes both allure and danger. They also discuss how the story's twist ending — involving Sigvald’s tragic sacrifice — can be visually and narratively elevated to leave a lasting impression.

Educational takeaways include writing with collaboration in mind, balancing creative freedom for artists while providing essential guidance, and using evocative language to establish tone. The podcast underscores the iterative nature of comic creation, offering practical advice on polishing scripts and enhancing storytelling through artistic and narrative collaboration.